Happy Monday! Well not really, it’ll only be a happy Monday if Monday never came. Oh well.
Anyways, I thought and thought about what today’s blog post would be about. I had many ideas but they weren’t fleshed out enough. And so they’re temporarily on hold for a later post date. So for today’s post, I thought I’d show how to write an erasure poem.
Last May, I shared an erasure poem I did as an assignment for an online poetry class I took. You can read the poem, Responsibility, here. And today, I’m taking you on a step by step process on how to write one. And don’t worry if you’re a horrible poet or never wrote a poem before. Because it’s easier than you’d think. Ready?
Step 1. Find a text. It can be an article from a newspaper or a magazine, a scene in a book, etc.
Step 2. Take any text. As you read through the text take from any words you’d like to use. You can choose them because they jump at you or because you like it. It’s up to you what those words are.
Step 3. Create your poem. Rearrange all the words you’ve chosen and form it into a poem.
Here’s the words taken from a flyer my son brought home that I used to create an erasure poem:
to are proper steps harvest submit your choose winner name hole a spot mix in premium quality remove the gently the roots hands stem fill press down and use a and of pockets water regularly using or a according to instructions you can your to and to win
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To choose your winner
according to instructions
gently fill in a hole
press down and harvest
the roots, remove the stem,
regularly using a premium quality mix
and pockets of water are proper steps.
Or you can use your hands to
submit your name for a spot to win.
© March 14, 2016
Well, there you have an erasure poem written from the words of a student growing cabbage flyer guide. It can use some tweaking but still it proves the potent magic of words. And how truly poetry is everywhere and found in everything.
Ever tried to write an erasure poem before? Want to give it a try now? Share in the comments below!
PS I have two guest blog posts as part of the Can You Catch My Flow? Blog tour today! Write from the Inside Out and Stephanie Faris’ blog! Then another guest post tomorrow on Writing is Home and Thursday at Five Year Project. And again on Friday on Elements of Emaginette. Whew!
As a kid, I used to be able to write poems quickly, then one day, I couldn’t; seeing you pull this stuff out of your head so quickly truly amazes me and reminds me that writing a poem is a form of art. Kudos, and glad Stephanie shared you over at her place. Hugs…RO
http://www.intheknowwithro.blogspot.com
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Thank you Ro. In truth, it’s finding the right words to create the right potency that is the tricky part. Sometimes, it just looks easy.
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I hadn’t heard of erasure poetry before, but this is a really amazing artform! Thank you for sharing the technique. I love your poem.
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Thank you Heather. There’s a similar poetry form, where you black out words with a marker to create a poem.
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What fun! Definitely something I’ll be trying. 🙂
Anna from elements of emaginette
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Fun and interesting too. Give it a try and maybe share it too?
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Wow. That sounds like quite a challenge and you did such a good job. Only a poet could make something like that into something THAT beautiful!
Stephanie
http://stephie5741.blogspot.com
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Thanks Stephanie. And yes, it was a challenge. I was stumped a few times until I completed it.
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This has also been called found poetry, and there’s even a journal for it.
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Oh yes, and you’re talking about The Found Poetry Review? Will submit to them one day soon.
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I’d never heard of an erasure poem. Very interesting. I’ll have to try it. 🙂
@dino0726 from
FictionZeal – Impartial, Straightforward Fiction Book Reviews
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When you do, would you mind sharing it?
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I am delighted to have found your blog and read about you. My book is a poetic memoir. I found using poetry to tell my life story easier at the time. Perhaps I have other books in me as well. For the time, I read with great interest about your transition from Catholic school to public school. I went two years in 7th and 8th grades to a Catholic school before returning to public school. Today public schools are much different than in my day. I know all too well after my retirement from 48 years of teaching German. Poetry is my choice sometimes because it says so much in so few words. I had my students writing and illustrating Haiku poetry in German over the years and became used to this format. Happy writing!
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Thank you. What I remember most was huge amount of students. My old Catholic school went from kindergarten to 8th grade. But the public school I had to go, which only went from 5-8, seemed to have had more students. Maybe it was all in my head but seeing hundreds of unfamiliar faces really hit home that I ‘wasn’t in Kansas anymore.” I’m glad you’ve enjoyed my blog and congrats to your poetic memoir. I got into haiku, the senryu and tanka in college and even post senryu poems on Twitter. Here’s to more poetry books in our future!
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I second that! More poetry books in the future. The fun part of writing Haiku in German for my students was finding one German word to fill up the line with either the 5 syllables or 7 if they were lucky. I am a fan of small neighborhood schools and not huge public schools. When I taught in Virginia, I had a couple of high schools with 3200 and 3600 students. In NY we had about 2500 at peak enrollment a few years back. It is difficult to make friends in such an impersonal setting. Tell me more about your senryu on Twitter.Happy writing.
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Wow, that must have been hard. Must’ve created some interesting haiku’s. And as for my senryu, I like to pair them with images. I’d also say they’re at times philosophical. I even have them up on my IG too.
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Tell me what IG is. I try to stay current with technology. Images inspire me as well. I immediately create poetry in my head.
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IG is short for instagram. Here’s one of my image-poem on IG: https://www.instagram.com/p/_sgesQlzXs/?taken-by=lidywilks
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I love that poem. Don’t have an account. It’s an app? I need to look up a photo I was told is on instagram. Thanks for the fun and edification today.
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Thank you and you’re welcome. You can find the downloadable app for your phone with the app store or google play. And it’s easy to sign up online, just go to instagram.com
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Thanks, Lidy. I own an Android which I seldom use. I looked on the iPad for the app but nothing was free. I refuse to pay for it. I looked on the website as well. I’ll find someone who has it because I am looking for a specific image.
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I had never heard of an erasure poem! And my attempts at poetry have always been dreadful, so I’m sure you don’t want to see it, lol. It sounds like your blog tour is quite the success. Sending good vibes your way:)
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Thank you Quanie. I’ve heard that quite a bit from other people. Even so, if an erasure poem is not for you, you can try blackout poetry. Like an erasure poem, you can use any kind of text like books, letters, magazines and in particular newspapers. Then take a marker and blackout the words you want to leave. Here’s some examples of blackout poetry on Pinterest: https://www.pinterest.com/explore/blackout-poetry/
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This seems an interesting form. I’m definitely going to try my had at this. At least I will already have a banquet of words to choose from already 🙂
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“A banquet of words,” I like that. And fitting too. Let me know how it goes. Thanks for visiting my blog.
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I haven’t heard of erasure poems but this sounds so much fun. You did a great job, Lidy!
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Thanks Claudine. But it did get a bit dicey here and there.
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