I usually post on Mondays and Fridays, but I want to try a bit of experimenting. And decided to post on a Wednesday today and with a poem I wrote.
Today’s poem was a How Writers Write Poetry, a The Writing University Open Course program, assignment. Exercise 7 of the course was to make an erasure poem. Erase words from an existing text and frame it as a poem.
One can argue if erasure is really a poem since you’re using someone else’s words. That it lacks originality. An argument mentioned by the instructor from a past student. But, one also has to remember that poetry is all around us. Everywhere and in everything.:
Responsibility
a plan for
following the fire
and skimming areas
began activity
by day’s end,
in our power,
well and remotely,
assisting in
recovery capacity,
the effects of the
extensive oil spill
in required response.
go ahead.
standby for their use
with supplies of
storage, flotilla of vessels
and determined to do
everything in sinking
a boom.
© July 28, 2014
I’ve never heard of erasure poetry. Interesting concept. I think you did a nice job with it!
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Thank you Lori.
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Very nice! I really enjoyed the poem–I tried erasure once and thought it was a fun concept.
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Thank you. And it is fun as you say. Also amazing because of the many poems that can be created when erasing certain words for an erasure poem.
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I hadn’t heard of erasure either (but then again, I haven’t read much poetry in my day). I’ve only been brave enough to share one piece on my blog that wasn’t a novel excerpt, so kudos to you. Good job.
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Thanks Quanie. I plan to share more of my stuff on my blog. And a novel excerpt or two in the future too.
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I haven’t heard of erasure poems either but now that I have, I think it’s a fascinating concept! Well done on your poem, Lidy.
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Thanks Claudine. It was my first time writing an erasure poem. Wasn’t sure if I could craft a poem out of the words left. But in the end, I did.
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I join the crowd today as I’d not heard of erasure poetry before either. 🙂 I definitely learned something new today.
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Hmm, you gave me something to think about Dino. What if from now on I’d post about different poetic forms? And share my poems written according to those forms?
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I’d never heard of erasure poetry before, what an interesting concept! like your effort Thanks for sharing Lidy.
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Thank you Rachael 😀
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I think the idea of this one is pretty cool and creative! I would think that erasure is a form of poetry because although you do use someone else’s words, you are choosing the ones to keep and making them a new meaning. Nearly every word you use in other poems have been used as well by others and labelled theirs before too ^^
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You’re right Olivie. Words takes on a different meaning depending on how a writer uses it.
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I’d not heard of erasure poetry before, what a fab idea…especially for those ‘stuck’ times, when we need a little prompting.
Great post, Thanks for sharing 🙂
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Thank for stopping by. And you’re right, it’s a good prompt when you’re ‘stuck.’ It also makes you fully realized the power of words, their meaning, and representation, all dependent on how a writer chooses to use them in a sentence. Or in my case, a poem.
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